Winston Malone

Wow! So many things I want to say but I don’t want to sound repetitive because I think I’ve mentioned this before but I’ll say it again anyway. The imagery conjured up in this chapter is so varied and yet memorably distinct. The moonlit night with the boy by the window and the swamp at sunset! Don’t get me started on the thematic elements introduced at the end there. Also, poor kid. Heart hurts for him. Glad he got the healing he deserved. Nice chapter. Sorry I’m so far behind!

Beautifully written first part. Then the 3 guys were so intriguing that I tore through the final section. Wonderfully presented. I can’t get enough of the narration. 👏

Oh my. Very interesting indeed. I love how you address the reader and break the fourth wall in a sense. Very clever. Loving the story so far. Can’t wait for next week!

This setting is just wonderful, I must say.

Wow 😳 Such a great first chapter!

This definitely set the tone. I’m hooked!